DarkenedSlumber

Discussion in 'Declined applications' started by DarkenedSlumber, Jul 11, 2018.

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  1. DarkenedSlumber

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    Dear Becto,

    Hello, I'm Briar Dillon an Australian who loves to code and play minecraft I tend to play every day for at least 1 hour. I played Becto 3 years Ago when it wasn't massive i have watched Becto grow alot and im glad to say that there isn't much isn't would want to change.

    I have been muted once on factions for spamming people about Keys I try to help people about as much as possible mainly on factions and Prisons!

    I use discord here and there I love coding and I try my best at finding people cheating. I'm a VIP member working on getting raider with points I'm a bit of a rage person who is horrible at pvp.

    I go online as much as possible and im willing to do anything to help. I can't be online sometimes do to the fact I go to university for medical.

    I play KitPVP every so often where I'm happy to say cheating has decreased alot! People tend to be alot more mature and nice.

    Now I have been talking about me and the server to much so why would I be a good staff member. I'm a fair player and I will always give the appropriate punishments, I always read the chat even if im not being talked to I read it to make sure it's safe and mature, I tend to try my best to get to know members meaning I have gained a deeper bond with them.


    Thank you for your time
     
    #1 DarkenedSlumber, Jul 11, 2018
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  2. Karzima

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    Well your play time is good, but this application isn't. Lack of detail and effort I don't believe this is the correct format either. Also you have 1 week 4 days on your account so if you were on for 6 hours a day for 3 years I don't need to think too hard to know that doesn't add up. I'm sorry but I'm going to have to give this a -1 for just the lack of effort what I believe to be a lie or just lack of thought.
     
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  3. DarkenedSlumber

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    yes i dont have a long playtime becoase i had a 1 year break and it isnt 6 hours a day every day sometimes i could be on only a hour

    But thank you for your advice i will make sure to improve by it
     
    #3 DarkenedSlumber, Jul 11, 2018
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  4. Felicette

    Felicette Well-Known Member

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    Application isn't the best and it's lacking detail and a strong format.

    -1.
     
  5. DarkenedSlumber

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    Thank you for your info is there any other sorts of info I should include to help it
     
  6. Lucas S.

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    Low effort in your application -1
     
  7. Felicette

    Felicette Well-Known Member

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    In your next application, elaborate more on argumentative points that'll benefit you. Reflect on your mute and how you've changed. Talk more about you and who you are.
     
  8. DarkenedSlumber

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    I have actually fully redid my post please read Iver it and tell me qhat you think
     
  9. Dartino15

    Dartino15 Well-Known Member

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    Still, the application is challenging to read in my opinion. If you were to improve it further I would recommend using bullet points in order to make your points stand out. There are also some grammatical mistakes in the application such as incorrect capitalization. To name a few for future help:
    • "briar dillon" should be "Briar Dillon" if that's a name
    • "a Australian" should be "an Australian".
    There are some more mistakes, but until then I suggest you reapply in 2 months.
     
  10. DarkenedSlumber

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    It isn't to late to edit this but thanks
     
  11. Karzima

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    I see you edited you application darkened I don't think you know this but that's not allowed I'm going to leave a link here to the original application for new people to see. https://imgur.com/gallery/BO87KmZ
     
  12. DarkenedSlumber

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    Oh sorry I didn't realise it never said I couldn't and most of the people I asked about it either said I could or thy don't know
     
  13. DarkenedSlumber

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    Can I remove my application and rest my new one I had put in alot more effort into what it is now xD
     
  14. Shaymin-Sky

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    Agreeing with the points made above, it's a -1 from me. Also, you always seemed a bit short tempered in factions and forgot some requirements in this application (like age), and also was hinting at people to look at your application.
     
  15. Venerg

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    -1 due to childish behaviour in game.


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  16. Felicette

    Felicette Well-Known Member

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    Bad behavior + constantly redo-ing their application. -1.
     
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  18. somerandy

    somerandy Active Member

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    It's nice to have a sense of humor, but not one that would represent Becto poorly if you were accepted.

    -1 for obvious reasons.
     
  19. Flavourful

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    you're constantly editing your application and you shouldn't submit until it's completely done and you're happy with it. your behavior in-game shows that you're not fit to become a staff member.

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